(08-10-2011 01:33 PM)cleef Wrote:  Was feeling wake up...until the chorus dropped (no offence). Nice beat to it and some of the content is decent

Just a heads up though, i cant speak for everybody on here but quite a few members dont believe the illuminati bullshit, but would agree with most of the other stuff you talk about, so if you dropped that aspect im sure you'd get a lot more support on here as the rest of the social issues you talk about are pretty on point!

(08-16-2011 01:55 PM)zig Wrote:  they might kill u

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i have an anti NWO song, i dont think there are any PRO NWO songs other than subliminal shit

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where do u get ur beats?

yungglynn Wrote:I just want people to hear it and give reviews about it

(08-30-2011 11:00 AM)Chino Wrote:  I fell asleep after the first one :/

the two tracks are very different but they touch upon the same subject.
now i cant speak for everyone, this is my personal opinion, and my personal review
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when i heard of the first song, it went like it was going somewhere. i was liking the beat, and it was like you said, a quick set of lyrics so i took that to mind.
but as SOON, as soon as the chorus hit, that hurt you badly.
after the end of the second verse in the first song i stopped it in order to Avoid the chorus.

the second song was not that bad.
but the other guy killed it, the sudden pause in the lyrics while he was rapping made him sound like it was his first time in the booth, with his first written and his first time rapping.

overall:
you need to put in diversity in the music, talking about illuminati, NWO, satanic beings and whatnot for too long, your gonna end up like Alex Jones bro, im guessing you do listen to alex jones and whatnot, but who am i to say about it.

you said it yourself: MC's are supposed to spread the truth.

i give you one piece of advice:

Have a message that is ABSOLUTELY universal. morals, messages, themes, relationships in between families and the situations between all that good stuff.
enlightening the masses of simple things like what i mentioned just earlier will allow them to be more self conscious about the world around them.

Telling people to wake up and not give a specific detail on what to wake up from has no meaning to me whatsoever.

And now before you go off, and claim that I'm a hater:

yungglynn Wrote:I just want people to hear it and give reviews about it

there you have it, this is my review to you. think of it as constructive criticism and build from that.

i wish you luck in the near future my friend, until then
Peace comrade,
-Chino

(08-30-2011 06:46 PM)YaelTheGreat Wrote:  All he was saying is that you should change your chorus and talk about more topics than just NWO and illuminati. Whats the point of putting your music up for review if your not open for criticizm?