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01-20-2012, 11:31 PM
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haven't posted in here for a while, been keeping it on my tumblr, http://49beats.tumblr.com/tagged/rhymes, which really doesn't even have the good stuff which is still in my notebook. but i'm in an exceptionally good mood and there is a few people who could be the following if we could only light up a blunt or bump some hip hop in person. you already are in a way, and know who you are.

i see dead people in my dreams
and falsities in life’s seams
not every sea is how it seems
each passing wave brings another to save
I’m sick of playing God
seeing my angels fall and hearing strangers call
might cut through the facade, ending it all
but that’d be self destruction, too selfless for that direction
life’s ontological seduction is venomous ambrosia
for its temporary and temporal, a nebulous supernova
each celestial person is a black hole that worsens
my anxiety, the torment inside of me (but you’re still perfect)
for when I worry about you its cause ya true, quietly
defining everything I do
so fuck society cause they’ll unreal
and grasp the Absurd for its surreal
then when your gravity fades and Sisyphus has bowed
you’ll still have me to save and my beauty in ya shadows

the only way you’re imperfect is doubting your perfections
and the only way to be perfect is to embrace your imperfections
they said nothing was perfect so you sought to be nothing
your surroundings were ugly so hate you emulated, refused loving
but believe me when I say that you are enough
and i understand when you get caught in the rough
for you are everything I am and everything I trust in
within you lies a rare piece of heaven
never let it fade, thank you, for everything you have been.

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01-21-2012, 12:47 AM
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well done laz

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01-21-2012, 12:57 AM
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means a lot from you man, thanks. always trying to grow.

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01-21-2012, 06:51 AM
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got a thumbs up from hamish without a belittling comment. i did good.

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01-22-2012, 04:15 AM
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one of my favorites.

Vision? What do you know about my vision? My vision would turn your world upside-down, tear asunder your illusions and the sanctuary of your own ignorance crashing down around you. Ask yourself... are you really ready to see that vision?
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01-22-2012, 07:13 AM
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thank you i really appreciate it. gonna get to yours soon i'm just real busy lately

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01-22-2012, 07:45 PM
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Damn that's really good broski.

You're not your job. You're not how much money you have in the bank. You're not the car you drive. You're not the contents of your wallet. You're not your fucking khakis. You're the all-singing, all-dancing crap of the world."
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01-22-2012, 11:53 PM
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appreciate Smiley-grin

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05-13-2012, 12:38 AM
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Really digg this one.
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05-13-2012, 01:15 AM
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fuck this poem.

nothing escapes the sands of time.

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