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Who I Am
08-19-2011, 10:41 PM
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Who I Am
I am from the sand,
From high tide, and seaweed,
The fist pump, laid back, and surf rat.
The sun, the wind, and the rain,
The beach bound,
And hold fast.
From Anthony,
And Tracy.
I am from the long walkers,
Fast talkers,
And stories of Gods in the sea.
To love all of nature
Honor thy neighbor
Thearou, Milton, and Socrates.
I’m from the rivered streets,
Pasta and fish,
The vigilant and the virtuous.
From the slow goers,
And the plant growers,
From everything, every time, and every place.

"for what does it profit a man to gain the world and lose his soul?"
-Jesus
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Thanks given by: The Stoned Raj
08-19-2011, 11:59 PM
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RE: Who I Am
dope man. keep it up. do some verse poems next, branch out to different topics. this is a beginner's writing prompt, but you did a great job with it

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