Tired

[Chino]

i wake up to another day in this life
tired of the drama, tired of the countless nights
wage slavery breaking me like a woman broken into sex slavery
the gods must be hating me
but faithfully, i can go and create my own destiny
marry my love and father a kid, so successfully
but my real ambition is to live in peace
to be pleased by the sacrifices of the deceased
but instead im still stuck in a system corrupted
i cant move forward past the initial introduction
leaving me fatigued, sore and mentally tired
passion only drives me forward,like a heavy wildfire
but im running out of choices , and im slowing down
doubting the revolution i once believed in now
heaven help me, for i am tired and i need to rest
let me go to sleep and never wake up from this mess


im done with reality, im tired of this facade
im tired of revolution, im tired of my job
i just want it to end,please let me go to sleep
let me create another reality within my dreams

im done with reality, im tired of this facade
im tired of revolution, im tired of my job
i never wanted this, the same applies to everyone else
but how is it that we all live in hell?

Im tired of all the monstrosities;
it bothers me
the good resist, but evil triumphs so flawlessly
im tired of this deteriorating way of life
causing strife, gluttonous mentality "what i see is mine"
a modern society living in the colonial era
tell me this: do we treat people of color any better?
do we still portray women as the devils witches
and the natives of stolen land as continuous bitches?
nuked cities, but whined about fallen twin structures
and lead a crusade against my Muslim sisters and brothers.
im tired of this reality, it feels like another dream
that what it seems, unnatural presence conquering the Elohim
i cant stand it anymore, i must break these physical ties
like suicide jumpers learning how to fly
as i stand in front of the train of constant time, i wave goodbye
signing off, the homie Chino Aka the Scribe

inspired by:
Anno Domini Beats- Day Dreaming




just woke up and this rap was in my head by the time i booted up the comp
Thanks for reading and enjoy

Peace,
-Chino

EDIT: added Final Verse, please do enjoy ^-^

[PsychoMind]

I can relate to a lot many can. There's many everyday thoughts included in this lyric. I'm not very good at criticsm since I don't know lots about rhyming and stuff. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep on working Chino! peace, I'm also very tierd.

[Chino]

(12-27-2011 09:52 PM)PsychoMind Wrote:  I can relate to a lot many can. There's many everyday thoughts included in this lyric. I'm not very good at criticsm since I don't know lots about rhyming and stuff. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep on working Chino! peace, I'm also very tierd.

thanks man, i appreciate it alot

[PsychoMind]

(12-28-2011 09:57 AM)Chino Wrote:  

(12-27-2011 09:52 PM)PsychoMind Wrote:  I can relate to a lot many can. There's many everyday thoughts included in this lyric. I'm not very good at criticsm since I don't know lots about rhyming and stuff. I enjoyed reading it.

Keep on working Chino! peace, I'm also very tierd.

thanks man, i appreciate it alot

np man, keep on posting

[Chino]

Added Second verse:

Im tired of all the monstrosities;
it bothers me
the good resist, but evil triumphs so flawlessly
im tired of this deteriorating way of life
causing strife, gluttonous mentality "what i see is mine"
a modern society living in the colonial era
tell me this: do we treat people of color any better?
do we still portray women as the devils witches
and the natives of stolen land as continuous bitches?
nuked cities, but whined about fallen twin structures
and lead a crusade against my Muslim sisters and brothers.
im tired of this reality, it feels like another dream
that what it seems, unnatural presence conquering the Elohim
i cant stand it anymore, i must break these physical ties
like suicide jumpers learning how to fly
as i stand in front of the train of constant time, i wave goodbye
signing off, the homie Chino Aka the Scribe

[Asshole]

bump.