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05-09-2012, 09:57 PM
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Real
Real
Exuberance in the air, Intoxicating us into the despair, Grown to want what isn't real, A house, a car, Maybe some straight blond hair, Or a father, 'cause he wasn't there, S'posed to suppose that this is what's real, Realness ain't what you can touch and feel, Nor what you can gather and acquire, Real is when your you, Real are those damaged petals, Don't run from the scars, They'll show whether or not you want 'em, And like a rose from the concrete, Your scars exemplify your success, And the struggle the defines you. “If there’s a God He’s calling me back home, this barrel never felt so good next to my dome. It’s cold and I’d rather die than live alone.” -Freddy E |
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05-13-2012, 01:02 AM
(This post was last modified: 05-13-2012 01:20 AM by YaelTheGreat.)
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RE: Real
Bump. Criticism welcome
If any one can move this to writtens that would be great “If there’s a God He’s calling me back home, this barrel never felt so good next to my dome. It’s cold and I’d rather die than live alone.” -Freddy E |
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05-13-2012, 03:08 AM
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RE: Real
Moved.
#GOAT
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05-13-2012, 07:05 AM
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RE: Real
Real talk. No bad criticism from me, I liked it
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05-13-2012, 02:31 PM
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RE: Real
nice one Yael...good shit!
No Gimmicks
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05-14-2012, 02:42 AM
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RE: Real
Thanks for the comments guy!
“If there’s a God He’s calling me back home, this barrel never felt so good next to my dome. It’s cold and I’d rather die than live alone.” -Freddy E |
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