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09-21-2011, 08:52 PM

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RE: My first poem

well everything is self learned. and i was critiquing it from a lyrical stance, which seems to suit it. lyrics= poetry+rhythm

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My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-18-2011, 11:32 PM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-18-2011, 11:40 PM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-18-2011, 11:41 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-18-2011, 11:58 PM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 12:02 AM

RE: My first poem - Gezus - 09-19-2011, 12:02 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 03:07 AM

RE: My first poem - 1871 - 09-19-2011, 12:38 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 02:27 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 03:10 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:22 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:11 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 03:13 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 03:26 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:27 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 03:32 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:34 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 03:39 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:40 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 03:42 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:43 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 03:46 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:47 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 03:50 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 03:56 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 04:02 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 04:05 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 04:30 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 04:33 AM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 04:40 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-19-2011, 04:43 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 05:08 AM

RE: My first poem - Gezus - 09-19-2011, 08:15 AM

RE: My first poem - 1871 - 09-19-2011, 09:35 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-19-2011, 12:07 PM

RE: My first poem - Fuzzly Bear - 09-19-2011, 12:45 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-19-2011, 03:25 PM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-20-2011, 09:55 PM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-20-2011, 10:20 PM

RE: My first poem - wise_owl - 09-20-2011, 11:40 PM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-20-2011, 11:43 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-20-2011, 11:47 PM

RE: My first poem - wise_owl - 09-20-2011, 11:47 PM

RE: My first poem - Fuzzly Bear - 09-21-2011, 08:04 AM

RE: My first poem - ClichéGuevara - 09-21-2011, 08:10 AM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-21-2011, 08:19 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-21-2011, 08:29 PM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-21-2011, 08:52 PM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-21-2011 08:52 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-21-2011, 09:21 PM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-21-2011, 09:27 PM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 09-21-2011, 09:24 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-21-2011, 09:53 PM

RE: My first poem - YaelTheGreat - 09-22-2011, 01:28 AM

RE: My first poem - 1871 - 09-21-2011, 10:18 PM

RE: My first poem - Djoser - 09-22-2011, 01:52 AM

RE: My first poem - Guajira - 10-01-2011, 07:23 AM

RE: My first poem - 1871 - 10-01-2011, 09:35 AM

RE: My first poem - Asshole - 10-01-2011, 04:31 PM