Describe Yourself

[jedilightsticks]

Describe yourself, and rate the written of the person above.

I'm Jedi Light Stick,
I've got those fight tricks,
My rhymes are so slick,
Like schizophrenia, so sick,
Biceps hard as rocks,
Punch you so hard you're missing 3 socks,
Eyesight of a hawk,
Drinking protein shakes, not eating Wendy's,
Rocking grey, snapback hats always trendy,
Jedi Knight, win every fight,
Like Admiral Ackbar, got you in sight,
So be careful, try not to fight,
Think you know pain? I'll give you a new sight,
I'm the protagonist, always going to win the fight,
I'm the Burj Dubai, bringing new heights,
Just chilling out, rapping about, always positive, never any doubts.

^I just started yesterday, so don't be surprised if I suck.

Remember guys, rate the written of the person above

[marioalosangeles]

I'm Mario
always ready fa war, yo
got the heart of a whale
big enough to love on a worldwide scale
but don't let the kindness fool ya
you get on ma bad side, I'll revolt against you like Cuba
I support revolution,
as long as we have searched for other solutions
Big supporter of Immortal Technique
I sorta doubt the existence of a bigger supporter than me
Proud fatha to a 1 year old boy
who makes my heart pound harder in joy
I'm just getting off work and my mind is tired
I'll hit the hay, and hopefully wake up inspired
to spit some fire, describing myself
and maybe, just maybe write a whole song as well...


lol... Don't try reading this as a rap verse
it's more like free rhyming I guess, idk lol

I think the person above me is good for a beginner
coulda fooled me if he didn't say anything lol

[psy0nyd3]

^The technique line sounds very technique-esue. lol


The name is psy0nyd3,
ya better try to hide,
Cause when I talk,
I eminate LS Dyethylamide.
Yo I'm toxic, like I talk sick,
but dont worry friends,
I never talk shit.
Only concerned if
the wisdom that I walk with
gets overdrawn like
an east coast mosh pit.
Mario I know, you produce the ish,
but you better not go,
and throw out a sample snitch,
Oh n' by the way, happy dads day! bitch.

[marioalosangeles]

(06-19-2011 07:34 PM)psy0nyd3 Wrote:  ^The technique line sounds very technique-esue. lol


The name is psy0nyd3,
ya better try to hide,
Cause when I talk,
I eminate LS Dyethylamide.
Yo I'm toxic, like I talk sick,
but dont worry friends,
I never talk shit.
Only concerned if
the wisdom that I walk with
gets overdrawn like
an east coast mosh pit.
Mario I know, you produce the ish,
but you better not go,
and throw out a sample snitch,
Oh n' by the way, happy dads day! bitch.

Lmao thanks dawg!... that shit was Ill.
Props...

[Chino]

Im an artist, who's pen can clash with swords
with the element of surprise like SEALS invading beach shores
what i master in is the art of expression
for my initial impression? the world needs more color in
i fumble and make mistakes, hell im not perfection
but what i lack in ,i make up for in diverse determination
give me paper and a pencil, and you'll see my work in hand
one line to convey expression in a format you can understand
forget the hypscrisy, shatter the truth with my autocracy
while launching gurellia tactics onto a false democracy
or give me a mic, and i'll spit out deep artocites
like raping your ears with treasonous biographies

i am the jack of all trades when it comes to the arts
with a combination, of physical rage and intellect
with a purpose to infect,
mixed with spiritual meanings designed to wake you up screaming
look at what I'd be bringing.
bullets and raining mortars,
with a style of pain similar to Chinese water torture
i was born thru music, thus i can see the sounds and the lies
over-stand many lyrics like opening one's third eye
and cause more panic than north Korean missile silos
for i wrote enough rhymes to create an artist's holy bible
and even though my place in society can never fit
im stronger than you could ever be my friend, Deal with it

[A.M.S]

The ignant ass above wrote dope rhymes but he no OG
Next time, "REMEMBER" fool, read the OP

[x Nadzy x]

Yes my name is Nadzeeeey,
I can float like a butterfly and sting like a bee,
I am sixteen and lean, yes who else can be mean?
I'm a rebel, show my middle finger to the Queen,
I'll tell you what I think off you wether you're family or Miley Cyurs,
Yes I'm sicker than a chinese virus,
this game so easy, read it like a book,
you don't like my lyrics? Think I give a fuck?
I ain't like the crowd, don't care wether you want me to go or stay,
now I'mma' make you all pay, a young boy straight out of the UK,
you may think this is all superstitous, but half these people are just ambitious, I believe one day freedom will prevail, now knock, knock, my bars been delievered by Royal air mail!

[Chino]

^ nadzy: very fluent , 9.5/10

(06-20-2011 03:19 PM)A.M.S Wrote:  The ignant ass above wrote dope rhymes but he no OG
Next time, "REMEMBER" fool, read the OP

Oops lmao
my mistake

[Midnight EyeZ]

I’m tryna keep my feet firm on the ground,
And take a step back from life and try to turn it around,
Coz I’m sick to death of living in a circus of clowns,
That’s why you always see me looking with a murderous frown,
And it’s why in life I’m always feeling worthless and down,
And there’s a lot of shit I’m sick of feeling nervous about,
I’ve spent my years a man with plans of working it out,
And try to raise a buck for mum coz she deserves to be proud,
But I’m stuck tryna cope within a turbulent town,
With friends who’d rather see me buried with the dirt in the ground,
Sometimes I just wanna fire out the words in my mouth,
Until my face is blue and both my lungs have burst when I shout,
Coz no one really knows what life’s journey’s about,
Yet they’ll preach existence of a god in church to a crowd,
And you take your faith and place it in a cleric’s account,
Like he doesn’t teach the bible so he’s earning a pound,

[Djoser]

^9/10

My fiery heart contrasts from my cold stare
So hot, I exhale smoke when my nose flare
Giving me courage like the middle of nowhere
Naturalists got it twisted, claiming I'm only so rare
There's only one me, so isn't the word for that, unique?
I'm an one man army that makes your crew leak
Gold from the waist or liquid rubies oozing from the dome
As I laugh too loud to hear their undertones

[Djoser]

bump...

[Gezus]

Yo just because Halloween is around the corner doesn't mean ya need to raise the dead.